The peer revision activity yesterday was very helpful. The examples being read along with the feedback allowed me to go back to the drawing board and really revise and not surface revise. Up until now I believe I clumped editing and revision together.
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I talked about revision but I know now all I was doing was editing. What a difference. Also it feels good to read something that has my voice in it!
I was SO thankful for yesterday's revision opportunity. Lois really gave me great, critical feedback to send me off and writing again. I am not yet finished with my essay yet but I was thrilled to get that level of constructive guidance from an expert like Lois. I, on the other hand, feel unqualified since I do not teach English and practically froze at the thought of giving Sue feedback. I was quite serious about the one heartfelt piece of advice I shared but I didn't want to say anything else because I just wasn't sure. Next time I'll do better!
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